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Postby swarlock » Thu Jan 12, 2006 10:24 am
Thought I'd mentioned that I started a smurfs fan fiction story on my site at

http://steven34.www.50megs.com/smurfics.htm

It can also be found at http://www.fanfiction.net/~swarlock
Friendship is everything.

Postby attombomb7 » Thu Jan 12, 2006 1:00 pm
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very impressed! and love your artworks and stories!
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(my fake smurf collection ):)

Postby swarlock » Thu Jan 12, 2006 1:44 pm
Thank you. The artwork isn't all mine though.
The Tracker Smurf is a cel that was given to me by Mr. Joe Barbera years ago and the pix in the first story is Raven's Child.

I'll be getting a new printer shortly. Then you'll see my art then. 8)
Friendship is everything.

Postby Rachel » Thu Jan 12, 2006 3:01 pm
Hi swarlock, it certainly looks interesting. I have had a quick read but will try and sit down with a cup of tea at some point and finish the story. :-D
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Postby bundleofkent » Thu Jan 12, 2006 5:29 pm
off barbera himself-wow! tell us more

martin :worship:

Postby swarlock » Mon Jan 16, 2006 2:04 am
off barbera himself-wow! tell us more

martin :worship:
Long story short.

A friend I know knew his secretary at the time and I wrote him a nice letter praising the show. A few months later I received a hand drawn painted cel signed and autographed by him. :D

It had it framed back when I was still living in New York.
Friendship is everything.

Postby swarlock » Mon Jan 16, 2006 2:10 am
While I wait for my new printer-scanner to come. I took the liberty of using my Mother's yesterday and colored it using Photoshop.

It's a bit crude to be honest but it does give me the opportunity to flex my drawing skills every and then.

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More will follow eventually between Raven's Child and myself.
Friendship is everything.

Postby DrunkSmurf » Mon Jan 16, 2006 9:37 pm
Hey, your writing is good (as a "failed" writer (alas!) I have experience).

My only complaint: shifting point of view weakens some of the story's impact. You go from baby smurf's head into smurfette's head and bounce around a bit so we don't know exactly who the protagonist is. This is less significant in visual media (like comics or movies) but in prose, readers like to latch onto somebody.

Or, at least that's what the screaming herd told me before they chucked me over the cliff....

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Postby swarlock » Mon Jan 16, 2006 10:07 pm
It's not my intention on to stay with the thoughts any one character in the story. They are there more as moral support for Papa and the Good Gargamel.

As the story progresses more will be made clear.

After this tale ends I will sent them on a few more time trips and then back home where a very important decision will be taken concerning their future in the forest.
Friendship is everything.
Postby swarlock » Tue Jan 17, 2006 1:23 pm
Here's another picture which will be added before the story I'm working on is over.

http://steven34.www.50megs.com/babysmurfs.jpg
Friendship is everything.
Postby Raven Child » Tue Jan 17, 2006 11:18 pm
Hey, Swarlock...Just joined this group and noticed your links to your story...thanks for including my artwork with your story...when I get more time I shall send them to you :D

Can't wait to see what else you will add to your story!

Take Care,
Raven Child.
"Why survive life when you can live it?"
come see my website with my artwork and stories: http://www.theravenchild.com

Postby aussiesmurf » Wed Jan 18, 2006 12:14 am
Welcome Raven Child, love the pictures :-D

The site is excellent... :D

Its really handy when ur at work and no one is looking... :)
:flower:

Meagan

Postby Fram » Wed Jan 18, 2006 2:02 am
:welcome: Raven Child!
:sheep: Bored of normality, why not go smurf? :sheep:

Postby puffuonecent » Wed Jan 18, 2006 6:37 am
Welcom on board. :-D
Cogito ergo Smurf!
I think therefore I smurf!

Postby Rachel » Wed Jan 18, 2006 2:04 pm
Hi Raven Child, welcome aboard. :welcome:

I love your smurfy art work. Very nice. :clap:
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Postby swarlock » Wed Jan 18, 2006 2:30 pm
Hey, Swarlock...Just joined this group and noticed your links to your story...thanks for including my artwork with your story...when I get more time I shall send them to you :D

Can't wait to see what else you will add to your story!

Take Care,
Raven Child.
Welcome aboard, my dear. I finally got my new printer so more scans will be done soon for my story.

Keep sending the pictures. I'll need some of them for future stories. :D
Friendship is everything.

Postby Raven Child » Wed Jan 18, 2006 7:28 pm
Thanks for the warm welcome everyone...as soon as I get more time I shall draw more pics for your story. In the meantime I am also updating my fic...as well as dealing with my late husband's estate.

Take Care All!

Raven Child.
"Why survive life when you can live it?"
come see my website with my artwork and stories: http://www.theravenchild.com

Postby swarlock » Fri Jan 20, 2006 11:10 am
Thanks for the warm welcome everyone...as soon as I get more time I shall draw more pics for your story. In the meantime I am also updating my fic...as well as dealing with my late husband's estate.

Take Care All!

Raven Child.
Good luck with that part of your life. I hope it goes well. These things can get really sticky if you don't handle it right off the bat.
Friendship is everything.

Postby Brainy's Babe » Sat Jan 21, 2006 5:36 pm
Thanks for the warm welcome everyone...as soon as I get more time I shall draw more pics for your story. In the meantime I am also updating my fic...as well as dealing with my late husband's estate.

Take Care All!

Raven Child.
Raven Child!!!! :hug: Glad yo made it here! Read the two latest chapers to "How things Smurfs" :D It great to see the story rounding, as enjoyable as alwys!!!

I'm very sorry to hear about your loss. I hope your pain eases and I'll be wishing you all the best.
I'm not sickly - I'm Brainy!

You ain't seen nothing 'till you've seen SMURFETTE.

Postby Guest » Sat Jan 21, 2006 5:39 pm
Hi Raven Child, sorry I haven't said welcome before, I've looked through your site before when I saw it on Blue Buddies and thought it was very interesting. Welcome to the forum. :welcome:
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